Portfolio Planning

Most of my previous blogs have either been me analyzing a specific topic or speaking my mind on something; however, this time, it’ll be a little different. For this post, I’ll be writing a more informative piece explaining my plans for my English summative.

My task for this summative is to make a portfolio that includes four different media outlets we’ve used throughout the course. Each of these media texts should work together to bring light to something interesting or significant I noticed throughout the novel.

My portfolios thesis will be: The infamous view that all men in our society are dominant while women are inferior is explored vigorously and unfairly throughout Lullabies for Little Criminals. The novel depicts women in a negative, stereotypical manner, ultimately degrading them as a whole. Through the perspective of a feminist lens, it becomes evident how men have cultivated the power to restrict and make decisions for a woman in both this novel and in today’s society.

Below, is a brief description of what media texts I plan to use and why I think that specific outlet is best to explain my thesis.

Persuasive Essay

For the first part of my portfolio, I have decided to write a persuasive essay on the different ways women are negatively portrayed through society. I will be exploring how men devalue women in ways that make them look absurd. I think that writing a persuasive essay will be a good idea for me because I believe it’s one of my most potent forms of writing. I also think this types of essay is suitable for my topic because it allows me to use logic as well as emotion to draw from. This topic is very controversial and heavily talked about in today’s society, so I believe using passion, rhetorical questions and imagery will enhance my writing in a way that will display my points in an effective manor.

Blog Post

I will be exploring how men have cultivated power to make decision for women in the novels society and today’s society through a blog post. The reason I choose to do a blog post, is because it’s a great way to get a few but important points across without being very formal. I can talk informally and use specific words styles that other mediums will not let me. Through a blog post, I will be using a conversational tone to make my readers really understand what I’m trying to say while allowing for feedback and comments. This medium will also allow me to use parenthetical citations and detailed images to prove my ideas further. Since i’ll be including a portion about our society today, hyperlinks will enhance my points and backup my observations.

Concept map

I will use the features of a concept map to dive in deeper into how the idea of how patriarchy is used within the novel. (Patriarchy is simply the exploration of how women are inferior to men). I will be using examples and different scenarios to showcase how men and women are not seen to be on the same level. I will also be showing examples of how women are seen to be inferior, as well as showing examples of how men are seen to be dominant. The reason I choose a concept map is that it can get an essential idea across without using long sentences. It’s also very visual so it can be easier to understand and will allow the readers to see a physical connection between two things rather than just thinking about it.

Remix

For my last media text, I’ve decided to create a remix in terms of creating something new from 5-6 original posts. I will rearrange certain elements and use pictures to explain some major points seen in the novel and will display them as a whole. Since I’m doing a digital portfolio, I will post both the original cover and my cover and discuss the differences and what each picture means. I think that a remix will fit into my portfolio well, as I will be able to show and prove my thesis in a different way other than just using words. It will add another dimension to my portfolio and keep readers more interested as it won’t be a block of text, but rather something visual that they can interpret in their own way. I’m also very excited about this media outlets as I’ve never created my own remix before so I’m looking forward to facing a new challenge. I do believe, that this portion will be the trickiest part of my portfolio as I will be attempting to use many different software like illustrator and Photoshop to create my new image. On top of that, I will also be making that imagine into a mosaic so it will be a lot harder to cite those images and make it in a way that will be effective to my portfolio thesis.

Skills Learned

Throughout this course, I’ve learned so much and developed many skills that I didn’t have coming into this class. Starting from the beginning of unit 1 all the way to this post I’m writing right now, I’ve learned how to properly analyzing a text through literary theories as well as learn how important it is to infer something and make connections etc. Over the course of this semester, I’ve learned more about remix’s, blogs and literary theories more than I ever have, including how to properly give credit. I feel like looking from an overview, a major skill that I’ve acquired is time management as well as looking through different lens to see what a text could mean in different ways.

-ZK

Innocent until proven guilty?

Anyone who is accused of committing a crime should have a fair trial with an equivalent examination of all evidence, as well as being perceived as innocent until officially proven guilty. This is a joint statement that applies to almost everyone as many countries have these rights outlined in their legal documents. However, why was Adnan Syed not given these rights?

In 2000, a jury had found Adnan Syed, a 17-year-old boy at the time, guilty of killing his ex-girlfriend, Hae Min Lee out of spite and jealousy. He was charged with first-degree murder and was sentenced to life in prison based on evidence shown at trial. Nonetheless, I believe Adnan Syed is innocent for the reasons listed below.


Based on “Serial,” my reasons begin with…

Asia McClain

While listening carefully to the first couple episodes of “Serial,” it was brought to my attention that a student named Asia McClain, had written a letter to Adnan explaining a significant fact. This letter fell into Adnan’s favour as it pointed towards his innocence. However, it was not processed as evidence. On January 13th, 1999, around 2:36 pm Hae Min Lee, Adnan’s ex-girlfriend was found dead. Adnan was arrested for her murder and sent to jail. However, according to Asia’s letter, it would’ve been highly unlikely for him to have murdered her as Asia saw him at the library around 2:30 pm. As she mentioned in her letters “I am not sure if you remember talking to me in the library on Jan 13th, but I remember chatting with you. Throughout your actions that day I believe in your innocence” (McClain). Not only did Asia see and talk to him at the library, but she also spoke about his character. According to her, he did not seem like a jealous, rage-filled person who wanted to kill Hae, but instead a person who wished her all the happiness. I don’t think it’s possible to kill someone and hide their body all within 6 minutes. Asia’s letter was very crucial to Adnan’s case but wasn’t used, making me believe that someone is screwing him over.


Jay’s Irregularity

Is it just me or does Jay’s story change a little every time he gets interviewed? While doing some research, I saw that Jay, one of Adnan’s many friends, had an inconsistent story. According to Jay, Adnan mentioned that “he was going to kill that bitch” because “Hae made him mad” (Serial episode 1). Based on this testimony the state built their case and illustrated Adnan as a crazy guy who became a murder over rage. However later on, Jay mentioned that Adnan jokingly said  “I think I’m going to kill her, yeah, I think I’m going to kill her” (Serial episode 2) contradicting what he said previously. On the night of Hae’s death, Jay mentioned that Adnan called Jenna’s landline whom he was with, around 3:21 pm asking for a ride. Then later on, Jay changed his story and says Adnan wasn’t the one who called, it was actually himself who called her landline. However, this doesn’t make any sense because why would Jay call her when they were already together at her house? This also doesn’t make sense because Jenna clearly stated that Adnan was the one who called and not Jay. To make things worse, when the call was traced back, it pinged a tower that was nowhere near Jenna’s house showing me that the phone call wasn’t from Jay. I believe there was no substantial evidence pointing towards Adnan’s guilt, but only loose ends created by Jay’s lies.

Adnan’s Personality

Almost everyone portrayed Adnan as an average guy who did whatever everyone else did. Nothing about him was out of the ordinary, weird or even creepy. According to many peers, he was the definition of a golden child. “He was an honour roll student, volunteer EMT. He was on the football team. He was a star runner on the track team. He was the homecoming king. He led prayers at the mosque. Everybody knew Adnan to be somebody who was going to do something really big” (Rabia Chaudry). Adnan excelled in many things and did not have any prior arrests or any run-in with the laws yet he was painted to be a rage filled monster. Although he had no recollection of what happened that night, I believe that this  type of personality would not have murdered someone.

Why choose this medium?

This medium allows me to express my own opinion, thoughts, and ideas in a way without having to be formal, which creates a conversational environment. Writing a blog is typically done in an informal tone and creates a platform where I can speak my mind and show my ideas in an insightful way. There is no right or wrong when it comes to blogging as there are no restrictions on what you can discuss. I can freehand a post and speak what’s on my mind without having to worry about what people say, as it’s an opinion based medium. Unlike a podcast or a video, I don’t have to create a script of what I want to say, nor do I have to edit the video or podcast to make sure no external sounds are being heard that can distract the reader. Blogs over other mediums allow me to show visual content as well. I can use pictures, videos and links in a post to enhance the understanding of my audience since some might be visual learners, whereas in a podcast I can’t do that. One thing blogs have that podcasts or videos don’t have is text. Some people may find it easier to understand concepts better when they’re written down because it allows the readers to go back and re-read what they don’t understand.  

Other external sources used

https://serialpodcast.org/

https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/bs-xpm-2000-06-07-0006070134-story.html By: Caitlin Francke

The Road To University

Should grade 12 University level English be a requirement for entry into all university programs?

This is a very debatable question. Some people may say yes whereas others may say no. Majority of people believe that you need to take grade 12 English only if you are planning to do something related to it in the future, but in my opinion, I believe the exact opposite. I think that taking English is essential for entry into any university program because English teaches the basis of almost everything we do. Whether that’s speaking, writing, texting or creating an email, the use of English is always present. English teaches us proper grammar, punctuation, formatting and structure. These are the type of skills you will use in university despite what program or field you go in.

With grade 12 English you will learn basic skills like how to effectively communicate with others. Throughout your university program, you will be required to discuss ideas with your peers or professors to prove a point or explain your opinion. If this is the case, you will want to seem credible and seem like you know what you’re doing. By taking grade 12 English it shows that you know how to communicate through various links and will help you prepare for the discussion in your future. Being able to communicate effectively will make you stand out and will allow you to do your job well. During grade 12 English you will do many assignments that involve reading, writing speaking and will teach you how to communicate with others in different forms using the right way to portray yourself.

In any program, you will be required to express yourself. Expressing yourself if very important as it will be a large part of your future. In order to relay a message, you will need to know how to express what you want to say in an understandable manner so that it’s easy to grasp. Taking grade 12 English will help you learn how to properly express yourself as it will teach you how to use proper grammar and sentence structure. This course will allow you to gain more knowledge on how to proofread and make sure what you are trying to say is structured properly. Let’s think of it this way. If you don’t know the basic sentence structure or proper grammar you will seem less credible and your message won’t be relayed properly since your grammar may not be correct. These are all the skills that will definitely be used in university and the only place you learn them is in English. Once you get to university you won’t be taught basic skills since you will be expected to already know them from previous English courses.

Analyzing data and learning to take down important notes is very important for any U level course. Most University courses have a lot of textbook reading and reflection pieces. In order to fully understand the concepts, you need to be able to know how to differentiate between important and unimportant facts. Since university will have have a heavier workload and many assignments, you will need to know how to effectively take notes and think critically as well. In grade 12 English, you will look at different perspectives and practice how to analyze a piece from a new point of view. Without taking English in grade 12 you won’t have an effective understanding as someone else who has. University programs want to make sure their students are well prepared when it comes to English as it is used in almost everything.

This is why I believe that grade 12 University English should be required for any program. It will help you tremendously in the future.